The Official Writing Challenge
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This was an imaginative story that held my attention all the way through.

Nice job with the topic. Clever and well written.

Thanks. God Bless~
I really enjoyed this. You did a wonderful job of creating suspense, sprinkled with some humor. I think many of us can relate to wanting to retaliate on someone who hurt us. This is a great message. I think it would be a wonderful thing for teens to read. It's not always easy to restrain ourselves and this is a great example of how things can blow up in our faces.