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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Fame (05/10/12)

TITLE: A Famous Man
By caroline ferguson
05/13/12


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He walked this earth long time ago but many still know his name
He was a boy called Jesus and from the father he came
His life was for a reason and he lived here for a season
He had many followers who listened to his every word
They wanted to be with him because he loved and cared
He healed the sick and gave to the poor
He talked to the sinner and talked to the whores
He had a gentile manner and his love he shared with all
He made the priests and Pharisees angry one and all

He preached a different gospel one that they on God should call
The Jews they rejected him and planned his down fall
But the father let it happen it was his will
So he carried his cross to the top of the hill .
There the Romans mocked him striped him to
They threw lots for his garment and put him through hell
But as he died these words he cried
For give them lord they know not what they do
And he also forgave a thief dieing by his side

That day he went to hell and took are sin and shame
But three days later he arose again
Now he sits in glory by the father side
And waits for you and me forever with him to abide
Thatís why his name is forever famous
And he will be remember far and wide.
Because he is our saviour who for our sins he died


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/17/12
This is a beautiful piece. You captured the nature of Jesus in your words.

Be careful of the little typos like to instead of too, forgive being one word, and dieing should be dying.

You did touch my heart with these sweet words that describe Jesus. Nicely done.
Patsy Hallum05/17/12
Lovely rhyme!

One thing I saw that Shann didn't mention.. In last stanza, Our should have been used instead of are.

Help with proofing available from a lot of faithwriters if you want it.

Keep writing!

CD Swanson 05/18/12
This was a beautiful and loving tribute to Jesus and our Father. I loved the flow and the meaning...you clearly have a heart for our Lord,and your words prove it.

I have typos and erros in most of my entries, each week. It's hard sometimes to see our "own."

The only thing I could see, besides your loving tribute...was "Father" as respect to our God, should always be a capitalized.

However,I believe, that errors do not detract from the beautiful words you have written here. Thank you, I loved it.

I look forward to future entries with your heart for God.

God Bless you~