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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Fame (05/10/12)

TITLE: THE FAMOUS ONE
By brian ward
05/12/12


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Fame, on a prerequisite evades us all.

For who are we but mere human's. Are we not worthy

of the praise of other's? Have we not one thing in our lives that

set's a standard above other's? Fantasy stories paint a picture

of super hero's and of their fame. I say are we not super hero's

to our children or a family member?

Should we stand by idoly and let other's take our

glory? Or do we have the power to stand up right and say, I am

strong. I am powerfull and through Christ who strengthen's

me I shall overcome and prevail.

For whom do you know that has had a multitude of followers?

Disbeleiver's say he is not real. Scientist agree we came from something.

Satanist say he is null. We as christian's say he is .

For more than 2000 years Christ has been talked of , scrutinized,

crucified, adored, loved, wrote about and worshiped.

So I ask you can we by any logical means deny him? The

answer is no. Rather we are uncertain, fearfull of his judgement,

or we choose to not beleive. The fact is yet he still remains .

This my friend's is true fame. I would rather be like Christ, and be known

by all than not known at all. We all have weakness and strongness,

but Jesus Christ is my hero and his fame is timeless and without fail.

If he is not a super hero then what is. For he is most famous one of all.


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/17/12
This is a beautiful piece with so many delightful truths in it.

You have quite a few errors. If you are making something plural, you don't need the apostrophe, just add the s and save the apostrophe to show possessions or for contractions. A good proofreader would help you catch things like strength instead of strongness.

Your words have a lot of passion in them. You give the reader a lot to think about. I can tell you have a passion for spreading God's words. Keep writing.
CD (Camille) Swanson 05/18/12
Good job of proclaiming Jesus Christ and all His glory. And, great job of showing us "your heart" and love for Our Lord.

I loved this line:
"Jesus Christ is my hero and his fame is timeless and without fail" Perfect!

Thanks. God Bless~
Phyllis Inniss 05/24/12
I agree with Shann and your using the apostrophe in the wrong place and a few grammatical mistakes. However, I love the way you wrote with feeling about Jesus and showing that He is more famous than all.