The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
I agree with the title! You've done a good job with a touchy subject.

The MC is a little to abrupt for my taste. I would have softened her a little.

Keep writing!
05/18/12
You did a good job with a very controversial subject in the news today. Very contemporary, and well written. Nicely done. And, certainly on topic.

God Bless~
You did a nice job tackling a tough subject. The only thing I would suggest is to make your dialog more natural. Make a point of sitting quietly somewhere and jot down sentences and listen to the way people say things.

You did a nice job of staying on topic while still delivering the message God put on your heart.
05/20/12
You handled this subject well. A Christian often finds him/herself in a precarious position when he/she has to give views on controversial subjects. The media and public opinion can crucify you whichever way you go.
Good article. People who live in the public eye do have it tough. You did a good job of showing that.