The Official Writing Challenge
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05/17/12
I agree with the title! You've done a good job with a touchy subject.

The MC is a little to abrupt for my taste. I would have softened her a little.

Keep writing!
05/18/12
You did a good job with a very controversial subject in the news today. Very contemporary, and well written. Nicely done. And, certainly on topic.

God Bless~
05/19/12
You did a nice job tackling a tough subject. The only thing I would suggest is to make your dialog more natural. Make a point of sitting quietly somewhere and jot down sentences and listen to the way people say things.

You did a nice job of staying on topic while still delivering the message God put on your heart.
05/20/12
You handled this subject well. A Christian often finds him/herself in a precarious position when he/she has to give views on controversial subjects. The media and public opinion can crucify you whichever way you go.
05/22/12
Good article. People who live in the public eye do have it tough. You did a good job of showing that.