The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Lovely scentiments--just a tad bit of work on some spelling, and a tweak here and there. Other than that, beautiful. God bless you! littlelight
11/01/05
Good start, work on this, clean up spelling and pace.
blessings - dub
11/02/05
Very tender thoughts; with edits, a beautiful poem.
I agree with the other comments to be mindful of spelling, but it is a good poem. Keep up the good work.