The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really lovely. The rhymes are great and it flows so nicely.

You may want to check the forums to find a critique group or a challenge buddy to help you find little mistakes like to instead of too and or instead of our.

This was right on topic and has such a pertinent message in it. We all are seeking something and once we find Jesus, it makes handling the problems of life easier. Nicely done.
05/12/12
Short and powerful! I loved this poem. It flowed right into my heart.

Thank you.

God bless,

Camille~