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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Weary (05/03/12)

TITLE: A Weary Life
By caroline ferguson
05/09/12


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This life is a weary one
Itís long and hard, and times are tough
And without God, life can be rough
Many things we must go through
As we are born, and we grow up to
From the pain of birth, to the pain of youth
As we travel through life, and seek the truth
But to find God, is to find peace
As from or pain, and sin we are released
To learn to love our fellow man
And To show mercy, when we can
To trust each other, each man your brother
To share this earth, from the day of birth
Until he comes, for one and all
He has sent his messenger, he gave the call
So if you want to live, trust in him, and learn to forgive
And as you forgive, he will for give you
And you will live with him a anew
Trials will come, to young and old
But if we follow him, he will save our souls
So praise his holy name, Jesus the only son who came
To lead the weary traveller on there way ,
and to take them home some fine day


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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/11/12
This is really lovely. The rhymes are great and it flows so nicely.

You may want to check the forums to find a critique group or a challenge buddy to help you find little mistakes like to instead of too and or instead of our.

This was right on topic and has such a pertinent message in it. We all are seeking something and once we find Jesus, it makes handling the problems of life easier. Nicely done.
CD Swanson 05/12/12
Short and powerful! I loved this poem. It flowed right into my heart.

Thank you.

God bless,

Camille~