The Official Writing Challenge
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You make some great points in this. I enjoyed the two different definitions of weary.

My only suggestion would be instead of saying Rebekah comes off as remarkable show what traits she has for those who may not be familiar with the story.

I enjoyed how you shared some parts of your life when you felt weary as well. It helps the reader connect with the author.
Great job, and simply a very good entry. I really liked this on so many levels. The message it brought forth, the intensity of emotions, and I particularly loved this: "I have found that being prepared and alert enough to respond to the leading of the Spiritís direction can be the most rewarding feeling this world has to offer." Beautifully written and told!

God Bless you,

Congratulations for placing 14th in level one!