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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Weary (05/03/12)

TITLE: With Me There
By pam Leitermann


The last time I went there I could hardly stand up but I didnít let it get me down!I was tired of all the waiting and waiting every three days I had to go for what I called my fill up. Chemotherapy was a drag and I was tired so tired all the time.

One day while sitting there with my arm hooked up getting my fix it came to me and this is what I wrote for you my loved ones and friends and even for the people I donít know well. Please listen to me this is what I want to say to all of you that remain, if you don't know Christ Jesus as your personal savior then please meet with Him today.

It's not hard to do, Get on your knees and ask Him to come into your heart ask him to forgive who you are a sinner and then believe! For all you skeptics sitting there that say; I don't believe in God! Thatís too bad because He believes in you.

He has counted the number of hairs on your head. He loves you so much he gave his only son to die for you, and without Him you will go to HELL! Oh you say, I don't believe in hell! Well just because you don't believe in it doesn't mean it's not true! I don't want anyone I know or anyone I love to go there.

I want you all with me in heaven at the feet of Jesus my King, where we will be worshiping the Lord! Our lives on earth are nothing more than vapor we are here one minute and gone the next, we are born, we grow up, we have families and contribute to society, hopefully in a meaningful way.

Then you die! If you don't know the Savior and that is sad! But if you do know Him you live forever with Him in that glorious kingdom called Heaven! Oh' come with me to that place where the twelve fruit tree's bare there fruit every month, where the streets are paved with gold and the river of life will be crystal clear and gently flowing from the throne of God. A place where night will never fall because where there is light there is no darkness at all.

Come out of the world thatís what I ask of you, don't cry for me! Rejoice for me! be happy for me, you see I" am with my Heavenly Father ALIVE for ever I have a crown and a robe you see Iím a child of the King! Remember me with smiles and laughter for thatís the way I'll remember you all you if you can only remember me with tears then don't remember me at all...

II Corinthians 6:17 says "wherefore come out from among them and be ye separate saith the Lord and touch not the unclean thing and I WILL RECEIVE YOU...

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Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 05/12/12
This is a perfect testimonial. I don't think there is much more draining than cancer treatment. It drains, the body and the mind.

My only suggestion would be save your exclamation points for dialog. Let your words do your exclaiming for you.

You did a nice job pleading for souls you don't even know. I can tell God put this on your heart and I'm glad you obeyed and wrote this touching piece.
C D Swanson 05/12/12
This was hauntingly beautiful. It was well written, and I felt the MC's heart speaking with love and truth...while pleading to pay heed and to know Christ.

For all of those going through chemo at this time, I pray God's will be done, and that you all find your strenght in His love, and peace in His arms.

And if this is a true piece, which I feel it may be...my heart goes out to you with my prayers of love.

God Bless you,