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This is a perfect testimonial. I don't think there is much more draining than cancer treatment. It drains, the body and the mind.

My only suggestion would be save your exclamation points for dialog. Let your words do your exclaiming for you.

You did a nice job pleading for souls you don't even know. I can tell God put this on your heart and I'm glad you obeyed and wrote this touching piece.
05/12/12
This was hauntingly beautiful. It was well written, and I felt the MC's heart speaking with love and truth...while pleading to pay heed and to know Christ.

For all of those going through chemo at this time, I pray God's will be done, and that you all find your strenght in His love, and peace in His arms.

And if this is a true piece, which I feel it may be...my heart goes out to you with my prayers of love.

God Bless you,

Camille~