The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
This was a sweet story. I enjoyed it, and I loved how the two friends met. It touched my heart.

Good job. God Bless~
This is a very different take on the topic. At first I was taken aback by the twist in the ending. I liked how you went about handling the topic in such a different way. I suspect everyone may not agree with you but the greatest thing about this story is it really makes the reader think and delve into her own life. I also could relate to the MC in the beginning because I'm a very difficult person to get an IV in or to draw blood from. You did a nice job with this out of the box topic.