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05/03/12
WOW- This was an incredible story. It was so hard to read because of the "extreme brutality" that the MC suffered at the hands of that brute...but I was hoping for a happy ending.

How beautiful it concluded, and how my heart smiled at his peace being reunited with his mom, and in the presence of the Lord Jesus Christ. Amen! I loved this.

Great job.

God Bless~
This is such a powerful entry. It gives me goosebumps and I want to hang my head in shame for the things my ancestors allowed to happen. You made it all very real and it is so important to remember these times. Lest we forget, then it could happen all over and it does with the sex trade becoming more and more in the public's awareness. You did an outstanding job with this well written piece. :)
05/05/12
What a powerful and moving story. It portrays the brutality and indignity that slaves had to endure in the hands of their masters.
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