The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Perfect job of describing "wealth in the wordly fashion." And, in the end the best type of wealth "Jesus Christ."

Fabulous entry...I loved it.

God bless~
05/04/12
Very well written social comment on our lust for the love of money.

This would make a great series of devotionals.

Good writing!
You did a great job debating your point of view. Often pieces like this might turn me off if the writer comes off as sanctimonious but you managed to state your point without coming off as superior. It takes talented writing to do that. I also liked how you interjected a short rest by using a touch of sarcasm in the the line in parentheses. Ending with Job really drove your message home.