The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
This was a lovely story that had an air of authenticity about it...I wasn't surprised it was true. The true stories are always so special.

Nicely told, and beautifully written. Good message and conclusion. Thanks for sharing your story.

God BLess~
This was a good story. I liked the message at the end. God can turn hard times in our life into moments that glorify him in ways we never would expect.

I do wish you had shared what the competition was. I wanted to know more about what was going on and what blessed the sister during the family time.

You did a nice job of presenting the topic in a different way. With the Olympics approaching, it's easy to see how many value winning above all us.