The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Beautiful poem, it flowed so easily and told so much truth. Loved it. Thank you.

GOd Bless~
This was such a clever poem. I loved the way you contrasted the two lines. It really helped make your point that there are two ways in this world, the world's way or God's way. The way you formatted this poem really drove your point home without coming off as preachy.