The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
Wow - great and powerful flowing poem. Loved the last verse. Really well done. I enjoyed this so much. So good.

Thanks. GOd Bless~
I'm not usually really gbig on poems as I feel so much goes over my head. Though I stumbled once or twice (One spot was the towel in hand washing feet) for the most part the flow was beautiful on its own merit. Then you added the perfect words to expand on the flow. The way you worded each line and knew when to stop is amazing. You were bale to get me into the rhythm of each verse and that's something that is hard for me to do. The message is beautiful and right on topic. I so enjoyed this piece.
05/07/12
I really enjoyed this poem...the flow was nice and the words were very thoughtful about being rich.

A very good read.
05/08/12
This is the best poem I think I have read on challenge so far. Really good, I write poetry but not like that! True to topic and the topic made it all the more inspiring to me .....I loved it.
05/10/12
Congratulations and God Bless~
05/11/12
Congratulations on your first place! A lovely meditation on being 'rich'. I especially like your last 2 stanzas.
05/11/12
Congratulations and ... welcome to Level 2!