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05/03/12
Beautifully done and said. This is a lovely piece, poetic and wonderful in form and a powerful devotional.

Thanks. God Bless~
A lovely and, yes, beautiful thought. I think of Him all day long.
I like the way you worked the phrase in so well, just when it was needed.

Good job, Janice85
This is really beautiful and such a clever twist on the topic.

My only complaint is the lack of punctuation in spots interrupted the flow of this delightful piece.

I thought it quite clever to go through different parts of the MC's day and relate a Bible verse to that section. This is a creative and fresh take on the topic. The best riches in the world can be found amongst the words of the Bible.
05/05/12
I enjoyed this piece; on topic, unique, and meaningful. I was distracted by the lack of punctuation. It could almost be a free verse poem.

Nicely done!
Great writing! I am a stickler for punctuation and I think this could have used a few.
05/08/12
Oh this was lovely, my heart is always with the homeless and the way God seems to take care of their needs. God Bless you for this....absolutely beautiful..and touched my heart. Great.