The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
I liked the comparison of aroma with attitude. Enjoyed reading your work. God bless ya, littlelight
11/01/05
There is a wonderful technical thing happening in this essay. It is almost entirely 2nd. person - that takes talent. Caution must be taken to include the "you" in the "we" statements. You pulled this off fairly well. A couple of dips into 3rd. or 1st. person, but generally this is a well put together essay. Thanks, I enjoyed it.
blessings - dub
11/01/05
Great take on the topic! "you are the only Bible' not 'your' the only... very nice writing!!:)
11/02/05
I love the bit about the "Aunt Martha" smell!