The Official Writing Challenge
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05/03/12
This was a very good story. I enjoyed its simplicity but powerful meaning. Nicely done. Thank you. GOd BLess~
05/05/12
A nice story and spot on topic. Reminds me of the scripture that says "Godliness with contentment is great gain."

Reading aloud will help you catch things like when you said 'Joyce' twice in the same sentence.

Good job!
It always inspires me to see the riches people once possessed that do no matter once Jesus enters the picture.

Good Story!
This is a sweet story. You did a nice job of covering the topic in a way many can relate to.

There were still a few mistakes that you didn't catch but overall you did a fine job.