The Official Writing Challenge
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Kinda cute. It's also kind of like something between the lines. The ressurection. Nice story. God bless ya, littlelight
Wow! I'd sure like to see this expanded--what caused your depression, specifically how God brought you out of it. You've tantalized us with this brief story--more, please!
Neat little package, says so much with few words. Good job. Thanks for posting.
blessings - dub
I needed more about her experience..what you wrote was written well..just needed more detail to hold me in the story!Thanks!
Great beginning. I'd love to read more of the between the lines story.
Oh, let me add--good title. It grabbed me.