The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful and powerful reminder of how amazing our Father is in all He does and all He wants for His children.

This was a well written entry, thank you for this

God bless~
Nice reminder and a much needed challenge to go forward in our walk with the Lord.

Wing His Words!
This is a lovely devotion. I really liked how you started with a personal message everyone can relate to.

I think it would have made a stronger ending if you had left off the last line. I often think I need to summarize or wrap it up for the reader but if you get your message across you don't need to do that.

You did a great job of getting your message to the reader. You did a nice job of writing on topic too. I also thought the verses you chose were perfect for your message.
Congratulations for ranking 11th in level one!