The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/12
Wow - Moving and powerful. Thank you for this well written entry that revealed and spoke volumes in a limited amount of words!

Great job. God Bless~
Wonderful thoughts you have shared. I enjoyed this immensely. Maybe next time seperate it into stanzas or sections. Makes it easier to read.
04/27/12
This is beautiful...
So sad...
You have a real flare for writing!

Wing His Words!
This is really lovely. I thought it was quite clever to use the photo album as a way of recounting history. Nicely done.
05/03/12
You've drawn an absolutely beautiful picture here of the man in the rocker. What imagery! Congratulations!
05/03/12
FaithWriters hug!
Congratulations!

Wing His Words!
05/03/12
Congratulations on your EC! Wonderful entry.
05/03/12
Really lovely, and also heart-wrenching, especially as he burns his photo memories. Well done and congratulations on your win!
05/10/12
This was such an enjoyable read as it painted such clear pictures in my mind of your MC and his photo album. Nice even flow throughout this poetic entry. Great job and I'm applauding your first placement and EC wins. I'll look forward to reading more of your entries.