The Official Writing Challenge
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God reaches out to us in so many ways...finding that website and the woman who touched your heart was God's personal message to you.

Thank you for sharing this story. My heart was touched.

God Blessed~
Thanks for sharing such a real look at life. We rejoice at times, we hurt, we question, we find healing, we move on.

Keep moving on with your writing.

Wing His Words!
I really enjoyed this piece. It was on topic and fresh and different.

The only thing you might want to consider is instead of using all tag lines like she said, is to describe the speaker's actions. For example "What is that?" Sally held her breath, as she looked into her doctor's eyes. It helps paint a picture for the reader.

You touched my heart with your words. Having a baby is something many women look forward to and having that option taken away is really difficult. I know this piece will help many people to start the healing process.
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