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This was powerfully executed and cleverly crafted. I loved the natural interaction with the mother and son. Great dialogue and realistic in outcome. It only takes one or two words of truth with help from God to penetrate and cut to the truth. This story clearly demonstrates the "two edged sword" and how it can bring anyone to their senses.

I loved it! Thanks.

God Bless~
Nice dialogue between a young boy and his Mom; I liked that. It is tough for youth who take a stand for Christ; they need encouragement...

Wing His Words!
This is a great YA story. Though any age can be ridiculed for their beliefs, teens seem to have a more brutal effect. I could really relate to this MC. My kids all talked about their faith openly. They wore T-shirts with Biblical messages on them. I respect them for it because when I was in high school, I never would have been able to do that. You did a nice job with this piece.
You did a good job telling this story while reminding us of biblical truth.