The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/12
I sure can really relate to this one. Buying swamp land. Phew! Real estate deals gone sour sure can be a bummer, but letting go of the guilt is the way to go!
04/26/12
Good job with this entry, and spot on with the topic. Scary reality of how people can be swindled so easily...but with God's divine grace and love we can get through anything in time.
I pray this wasn't a true story!

Nicely written. God Bless~
I can really relate to this piece. Especially the part about not forgiving myself and even more wondering why God would even want to forgive such a vile creature like me. It was nice to be reminded that he forgives because he loves me that much.

My red ink would be when you described an action you said blew out slowly from his mouth. A simpler way is to say exhale. Perhaps if he inhaled deeply and closed his eyes while exhaling that might have painted a picture of a man trying to calm himself down.

Over all you did a nice job. It was definitely on topic and there were several messages for different people. That's always a good thing.