The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/12
Oh my heavens! This was such a powerful testimony, I felt the conviction and the love bursting forth through every line. Truth is so intoxicating to those who deliver it, and "hear it." I loved this amazing story.

I especially loved this: "Reach toward GOD’S hand that has not been shortened nor caused HIS ear to be too heavy that HE cannot hear your cry of plea." WOW! Thank you for this.

God Bless~
04/26/12
I like this message a lot. It is filled with a good take on life and on God's love and compassion. Thanks for writing.
This is a perfect story for the topic. I'm not sure if this is a true story but I suspect that it is. It felt real and I could see the pain in the MC's eyes. Nicely done.
04/29/12
I love the thought and your illustration of "taking hold of the plow and not looking back." You need improvement in sentence structure, grammar and spelling, but you gave us many wonderful thoughts to think about.