The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/12
There's an excellent message in here, one we all need to hear.
04/26/12
Nice segue into the Bible story we are all so familiar with...and nice research on Lot's wife.

Very strong message that was brought forth in a gentle way...I enjoyed this. Good job. God Bless~
I love finding answers to questions no one else asked but me. Very interesting. Nice job.
04/26/12
Really on topic. I didn't think of Lot's wife, but you couldn't have found a better example. I enjoyed this perspective.
This is an interesting retelling of Lot and his wife. It certainly fit the title. I liked that you researched and thought about what might be going on in her head. I know we are all guilty of sin and I wonder if I would have been strong enough to not look back.
04/29/12
The writer's "voice" was clearly heard in this piece. Good connection between the author and the reader.
One minor suggestion - read over your piece for spelling errors - a couple were noted (happens to us all). You wrote a cohesive, nicely crafted piece with a great message.

05/01/12
I really admire and appreciate the research you did.

This is written very well. With this kind of work you won't stay at Level 1 for long!

Keep up the good work!
05/01/12
Ildith seems closer than the gentle Edith for Lot's wife; I agree with you. Interesting take and a nice job.
05/01/12
"our souls are covered in stone and ashes and we become like pillars of salt." I really like this line in particular. It creates a vivid image of what sin in our lives does to our heart. Good job with writing a piece that totally connects with the topic,
Cathy
05/02/12
A very thought-provoking, obviously researched entry. Very, very interesting. I applaude your writing!
05/03/12
'... but do we? Not always.'

Be challenged, oh my soul.

It is difficult to sometimes turn away without looking back, but for many varying reasons. You did a good job of causing us to question our motives.

Well done.
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level one!