The Official Writing Challenge
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04/26/12
What a powerful description/explanation of what it means to not turn back. You said it so clearly by making it a simple choice.
04/26/12
Beautifully and brilliantly written and illustrated. Flowed perfectly throughout and touched my heart.

I loved it...and spot on with the topic, what a wonderful way to bring the topic home. Thank you.

God bless~
Flowed effortlessly. A very good witness for the call of God to save each one from darkness into His marvelous light. Keep up the good work.
04/26/12
I love the message in this piece. Good writing.
This is so beautiful. I love how it flows, almost taking me on a journey.

Just some tiny red ink, I think mostly you did a great job with the rhymes but a couple seemed forced. Like with and promised and not and God.

I do think the message is a powerful one that so many people will be able to relate to on so many levels. Thank you for sharing.
04/30/12
Loved it! I agree with Shann, the rhyme seemed forced, but the message is timeless. Keep writing!
Author note: Just a few hours new to FaithWriters, this was my first submission to the Challenge and I was so excited about the topic "Don't Look Back" that I didn't fully read the submission rules before entering this poem. This poem was written about 12 years ago and is very special to me as it is one of the first works written where I felt the Holy Spirit inspiring, moving...