The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/12
Good story, and held my interest to the very end. I think it might have been a little better if you could have told it through only one POV rather than both. However you did it very well and had a great conclusion. I loved your note at the end!
04/24/12
I enjoyed reading this, common people with uncommon love that allowed them to hang in through difficult times.

Wing His Words!