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04/21/12
I enjoyed the story and saw the topic reflected in the binding of the girl to a new Christian family.

Well done.
04/22/12
That was a good story.

I'll comment on one sentence: "My name is Jan, Iím from out of town. This should be two sentences or you could write: My name is Jan and I'm from out of town.

Good going.
04/24/12
This article is a good example of how Jesus wanted the Church to live, with others in mind. BTW none of the universities I attended helped us move into the dorms or apartments... would have been nice to have a church nearby.
04/25/12
I throughly enjoyed this read. You did a nice job telling it. Reminded me of a time many years ago when I had to move and was all alone and broke. My church totally surprised me by sending the men's ministry over with a truck and man power to load it and send me on my way amazed.
You brought glory to God. Thank you
04/25/12
Your article had such a personal experience tone. It reminds us of the never ending need of a church family and home.

Wing His words!