The Official Writing Challenge
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10/31/05
This is free verse, however the pace and beat are missing. I like the style; with work this will melt into a good poem.
10/31/05
Wish we could edit these comments. Also, it is either a period (.) or an elipsis (...) for end punctuation. Helps with reading.
10/31/05
I think was light and airy. Nice work. God bless ya, littlelight
Nice poem in free verse which allows for all sorts of possibilities. You have expressed a wonderful 'feeling'.
11/02/05
A very tender love poem. The word "Coz" in the last stanza jars a bit; maybe that line should be "Because I know it's you".
11/05/05
This is great i really enjoy it.