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Your love for the Lord and concept of His sacrifice are evident. The punctuation and rythm could be improved, but I certainly get your message.
Oh I loved this. Your heart was in this and your love for the Lord so palpable.

Beautiful job...and I am sure you made the Lord smile as it was a sweet sound to His ears.

Thank you. God Bless~
This is lovely. It starts in a very dark place something I can relate to all to well. However with just a little trust and faith the mood lightens and gives me hope. Well done.