The Official Writing Challenge
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I hear sadness here, but also victory. That is what Easter is about, right? This piece was a little hard for me to follow,but there's definitely a message.
This story makes the reader pause, reflect and think. I found it to be very clever. The MC's character was telling the story in a way that made the reader raise an eyebrow. But, in a good way. Whenever a reader needs to think, it is a good sign! LOL.

Anyhow - the message is clearly apparent...Jesus Christ's sacrifice for the sins of the world...For us.

I thought this was extremely clever. Thanks.

God Bless~
I enjoyed this. Sometimes I stumble a bit of poetry, feeling I might have missed something important. But this was nice (I may have missed things that others would pick up) but it still touched my heart. The last line made me smile. It says a lot about accepting oneself just as I am. It made me smile too. Nicely done.
Congratulations & God Bless~
I am humbled and inspired by designation of Beginner First Place Winner. Thank you for the encouragement.