The Official Writing Challenge
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03/18/12
Nice writing! I could sense the sights, smell and sounds both in the MC's surroundings and thoughts. There is a constant battle being waged in our minds.I love happy endings and am pleased your MC found peace & victory!
03/21/12
I loved this gripping entry and am so surprised it doesn't have more comments!

The internal dialogue and the angst and turmoil by the MC is compelling and powerful.

Beautiful job with the wrap up. A powerful story is one that brings the last line "home" with meaning. And, this my friend had all that and more!

Thank you for this.

God Bless~
I liked your vivid descriptions and the humble approach in your writing. The only thing you didn't do was explain just why you were walking this street. The when,why, where and how are so important. Other than that, a powerful piece of writing. God bless.