The Official Writing Challenge
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03/16/12
Huge lesson to be learned in this well-written story. I don't have anything I could point out to you to improve it. I enjoyed it very much.
This is a sweet story. Well done. And there is a good lesson to be learned from this: we should be childlike in our faith and slow to criticize others who think different from us. God made many kinds of people and he loves them all. I'm sure you intended to convey that message and you did a great job.
03/18/12
Well written piece that brought me to tears. As a pastor's wife, I've been on the bruised end of that kind of bitterness, and you portrayed it very well.

The sweet little girl, that so obviously loves Jesus, achieved so much by simply walking in love and encouragement. Wonderful job, and please keep writing:)
03/20/12
Wonderful-Beautiful story and flowed to such an emotional ending!
03/21/12
Awww...touching beautiful and powerful. I loved it.
A very strong conclusion...masterful.

Nice job. God Bless~
03/22/12
Wonderful job with this lovely story.

A hearty Congratulations!
God Bless you~
03/23/12
Wonderful story...very touching.

~Be blessed...so you can BE a blessing!~
03/26/12
Thank you for your comments. I'm happy you liked my story. I wanted to show how God is the one who does the work through those of us willing to be used.
Blessings,
Carol