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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: rain (10/17/05)

TITLE: Rain (v)
By adelina tomino
10/24/05


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"Rain rain go away,
Come again another day."
That's what I wanted,
On days of appointments.

It's better to stay home,
To sleep and to eat,
Getting wet on the rain,
Feels so uncomfortable.

Though time past,
I have to go to work,
To shop or for appointment,
Even it's raining.

Then it came one night,
I'm walking amidst the rain,
I am singing praises to God,
He let the rain falls to sinners and righteous.

I was quite amaze to myself,
How God had changed me.
I supposed to hate rain,
But now, I appreciate it.

Even it's raining or not,
It doesn't matter anymore,
Even I am wet and cold,
It doesn't matter anymore.

When the sky is crying,
As if my heart is crying,
It washes things, like washing my life,
But refreshes things, just like my life.

I realized that I learned to accept,
That the rain will surely come,
Like the rains of trials in life.
I need to face it, be washed and refreshed.

Oh, god is amazing,
Blessings are falling everywhere,
Like the rain that falls,
From Heaven above.

I have to accept,
I have to face it,
With joy and thanksgiving,
Rain is a blessing.


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dub W10/27/05
Light simple poem, good message. No particular meter or scheme, but a fun read.