The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautiful flowed smoothly and penetrated to the heart. I loved it.

God Bless~
Ah yes, I'm familiar with the predicament of these two opposite forces!

Nicely done.
I really enjoyed this. It is a lovely flowing piece that shouts the truth.
A lovely poem that flowed well and one that we all can identify with. Well done!
A wonderful piece of writing. I really liked that the "two forces" stanza was repeated throughout and then answered at the end ... with us no longer being pulled in two different directions. It really took the reader on a journey. Nice work!
You have expressed familiar truth well in verse.
This was quite good.

You could put it to music. Well written piece. I wouldn't mind putting it in a church bulletin.