The Official Writing Challenge
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Good job in retelling of "Joseph" and the trials and tribulations he endured. Nice internalizaion of what Joseph may have been thinking and feeling.

Well written and certainly on topic.

God bless~
I enjoyed this journey into Jacob's mind. You did a nice job piecing everything together.

You may want to make smaller paragraphs and double space between them.Also when you base a story on scriptures you may want to add a footnote at the end citing the book, chapter, verses and version of the Bible like KJV or NIV.

You did a wonderful job of writing on topic. You brought the characters to life. Nicely done.
This entry read very smoothly; however, you will want to check for double spacing next time. I believe it would add to the stability of your entry if you would refer to Scripture verses. I enjoyed this entry very much.
I really do know that Jacob is the father and Joseph is who the story is about. Tired brain is my excuse So sorry.