The Official Writing Challenge
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03/09/12
"Cute" story! I think this is a woman's worse nightmare. I found your story to flow quite nicely. It read smoothly and the story line was very good. The transition from AAA coming out, to them parting I thought played out well. All in all, I enjoyed your story very much.
03/10/12
A well written entry that held my attention from the first word to the last.

Nice job with this.

God Bless~
This is a good story. Ahh the wisdom of an 18 yo! (my youngest just turned into an adult as she likes to say) I thought once the tow truck showed up and she got out of the car the friendly stranger was going to turn into a bad guy. You had my heart pounding.
03/11/12
Great story!
Congratulations for placing 11th in level 1!
04/29/12
Carol, I'm going to feature this story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of May 14. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
04/29/12
Thanks Jan, what a priviledge! I appreciate the opportunity!
Carol