The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
'sandy things are things that fall' I would try to use another word than things to make this meaning clearer. I think you did a rgeat job writing this and your analogy was very clear!!:)
10/24/05
Well thought out and stated. A little vague perhaps on the topic, but a good teaching.