The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/12
Ok, the first thing I wanna know is how you got it centered? I love the way it looks!

And, I loved the poem, very nice work!

03/03/12
Love the format, and the message. Very nicely done!
03/04/12
Beautiful poem, with a wonderful message.
This is really lovely. I think many of us can relate to those cries. My only suggestion is you didn't need to explain it. Your beautiful words and the flow of the verses did all of the explaining for you.
These are wise and encouraging words. It is a nice job.
These are wise and encouraging words. This is a nice job.