The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
I enjoyed your poem, especially the last two stanzas. Keep it up!
10/26/05
not sure if I am getting the scripture connection. but what an awesome poem and like cassie said I love the last part..
10/31/05
All it needs is a refrain, this is a hymn, nicely done.