The Official Writing Challenge
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I guess this "Paine" turned into a blessing. Good job.
02/24/12
Oh, this was so good and its meaning so touching. I really enjoyed this well written piece. Thank you.

God Bless~
02/25/12
Really good story. I love that you used 'Paine' for the pains. Good job.
This is a beautiful story. I believe that it is true because the Devil recruits "thorns" to be in our side all of the time. I thought the made up names were quite clever --Paine, Thorn and Grant -- that's a story in itself!
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level one!