The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
Powerful story and how Jesus Christ saves and turns lives around. Wonderful job with this. Thank you.

God Bless~
02/25/12
I like this very much. I was interested from beginning to end. Good job!
This is an interesting story. It drew me in right away and held my attention throughout. Don't capitalize words like Mom and Daddy if they have a qualifier in front like my mom or her daddy. You did a nice job staying on topic and presenting an intriguing story.