The Official Writing Challenge
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This is such a great picture! You do need to work a bit on you tense agreement and your sentence structures. Great job!
10/27/05
I love the title/theme to this piece - rhythm in the rain. Very nice.
10/28/05
You know I love it! You're getting better all the time, you know. It's just awesome. Simple, fun and a great story. Although it's just a step on the building blocks of what you can accomplish (through Christ of course)... I'm so proud and happy for you! :D
10/28/05
What a lovely story. I like the description very much. It's like she was living inside a dream, which was helping her to once again get her bearings in the world. God shared with her an amazing sight! Thanks for sharing this piece:)
10/29/05
Lots of good description. Thanks for posting.