The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Lovely and well done! The birth of faith, as one learns God is faithful.
10/25/05
I love the rhythm of this poem.
10/27/05
This is really, really good. I so enjoyed reading this and I was surprised I could follow the rythm so easily. A very good job indeed.
10/28/05
What a wonderful poem! Storms do reek havoc with crops, houses, patio furniture, and trees. But after the storm, there is the breaking of day- God's reprieve! Thanks for sharing:)
That was great! I love poems that are also stories!
I enjoyed your story like quality to this poem. If more poems were written like this, I might read poetry more often. :) I especially liked the 7th stanza.
10/29/05
A nice poem - good images.
Wow, it's poems like these that I miss when I skip them. I don't really like poetry, but this one is pretty good.
Wonderful mood you've created in this poem! I can almost feel the cool dampness of the window pane as I read it. I especially like the third from the last stanza too!
10/31/05
Near perfect measure and beat. Good story line follows, hope the judges smile upon this one.