The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
Thank you for this touching story. What an engaging entry. It was totally on topic and concluded strongly.

Loved it. God Bless~
I liked the way you jumped a few decades to get to your point. You included all the important information without being wordy. I had a tear in my eye when I read your last paragraph. What love you have for your brother. Thanks
02/25/12
Very nicely done. What a beautiful story. I can see this testimony as a devotional.
This is a great story. Wow it's amazing that a preemie that young survived back then. My mom lost her first child due to spina bifida problems. Had he been born today... This is a nice take on the topic.
Tenderly written. The story has good flow and focus. Some editing in the first paragraph would help. The word 'so' was prominent. Good job, keep writing.
03/01/12
Congratulations on your well deserved placement! This was a touching story.

I look forward to your next entry. God Bless you~
03/01/12
What a beautiful story! Congratulations on being highly commended.