The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
Thank you for this touching story. What an engaging entry. It was totally on topic and concluded strongly.

Loved it. God Bless~
02/24/12
I liked the way you jumped a few decades to get to your point. You included all the important information without being wordy. I had a tear in my eye when I read your last paragraph. What love you have for your brother. Thanks
02/25/12
Very nicely done. What a beautiful story. I can see this testimony as a devotional.
02/25/12
This is a great story. Wow it's amazing that a preemie that young survived back then. My mom lost her first child due to spina bifida problems. Had he been born today... This is a nice take on the topic.
03/01/12
Tenderly written. The story has good flow and focus. Some editing in the first paragraph would help. The word 'so' was prominent. Good job, keep writing.
03/01/12
Congratulations on your well deserved placement! This was a touching story.

I look forward to your next entry. God Bless you~
03/01/12
What a beautiful story! Congratulations on being highly commended.