The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
Lovely and creative use of the topic at hand. Beautiful devotional piece that held His truth along with a powerful message.

Thank you! God Bless~
02/25/12
Beautiful and right on topic. Add a scripture and you have a great devotional.
You make some excellent points here. I liked how you showed different examples.

I will admit I was a tad distracted on the number of times you used the word experiment in such a short piece. I think you might be surprised if you count the number of times you used it and experiences. Try writing your piece without using the topic word or only use it once or twice.

The prayer is lovely and I can tell it comes right from your heart. It is beautiful.