The Official Writing Challenge
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02/24/12
This story meant so much to me! Thank you...I was blessed reading this. We cannot "outgive" God, He will always take care of His obedient and devoted children.

Beautifully written and nicely told. God bless you~
02/25/12
Nicely done. Beautifully written. You do have some 'run-on' sentences. Add some commas, or break them up into new sentences.

Thanks for this, enjoyed it very much.
Our whole life is one big experiment. I know God beams when we pass the test.
02/29/12
This story is very encouraging. God will surely bless our obedience. You drew me in with the conflicted emotions of your M/C.

Remember to break down your paragraphs to between 3-5 sentences and discard unneccesary descriptions to give it better flow.

Good job!

03/01/12
Congratulations on your ribbon! Your story was fabulous. I look forward to another entry.

God bless you~
03/01/12
A wonderful message. Congratulations on your ribbon.