The Official Writing Challenge
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How sad
10/25/05
Very effective and evokative. Well written!
10/25/05
Sorry, I meant "evocative."
10/31/05
Reminds me of some the poetry of the 60's, a heavy sad quality, perhaps better said than read. Try reading this out loud, with a tall cup of coffee on hand. Take a drink between hard breaks.