The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Awww! I simply loved this story. Nicely told, and well written. Good job with the topic. Fresh and entertaining. God Bless~
02/16/12
I absolutely loved this story. It gave me goosebumps (good ones) and brought tears to my eyes..

Very sweet...
02/17/12
An enfolding story with a lovely ending. Well done.
02/17/12
Powerful, heartwarming story. Great flow. Loved the multi-use of 'faith'.
02/18/12
Powerful story! You did a great job presenting this. I kind of want to know what happened to the baby's father, though.... I hope he changed too. :)
02/18/12
This is a great story. You did a nice job bringing the characters to life.

Don't capitalize doctor unless it is being used as a name.

There have been several abortion, then having the baby stories this week, but adding the violence to yours brought some suspense into the story. You did a nice job with the topic.
02/19/12
I loved this story especially her name.
02/20/12
I really liked the way you made me feel the intensity and fear the MC felt. Nicely done!
02/21/12
The story kept my attention right to the end. This was very well written.
02/21/12
This is a lovely heartwarming story and it flows beautifully. I love the very appropriate name - 'Grace.' Finished the story well.
02/23/12
Congratulations! God Bless~
02/23/12
Congratulations! Great job!