The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/12
Beautifully told - nicely done. I loved this. Thanks and God Bless~
02/18/12
Well, I for one, would love to sit and hear all of Father Kelly's stories! Not only did I get a good chuckle, I enjoyed the pace of this. You had me captivated in wanting to know the moral of the story. Great job in my opinion, of lacing humor with a message of wisdom.
02/18/12
Excellent. The humour is beautifully judged. It can be hard to get that right without descending into silliness, but you've really achieved it with this.
02/18/12
This was really funny but a great message and one I really need to be reminded of. Nicely done.
02/21/12
I loved it. Father Kelly is a wonderful character. I think you could do much more with his character in future stories. Great job!
02/21/12
Very funny story about a very serious subject.

Good work!
02/23/12
Congratulations for ranking 10th in level 1!